A mystery story

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Prop-232 –round-1

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The most influential characters in any mystery story or film are kept alive by the audience in their subconscious mind for a long time, and imagine living the lives of these characters in their own lives. Here I am making my first attempt to participate in this contest, I may not have understood the real intent of this contest, but because I am already fond of writing stories and many of my stories are shared by other communities. But it has been published and has also been appreciated. That's why for this competition, I am creating some characters in the story of such a murder mystery, whose full story I will write in the next part of the competition. There are 5 main characters of this story whom I will try my best to bring alive before your eyes.

1- The main character of the story is a mentally cruel, physically challenged but very strong-willed personality, this character Dennis gets angry about everything, all day sitting in his wheelchair with his telescopic gun Keeps an eye on the surrounding forests and parts of his house. Sitting in his wheelchair, he also hunts small animals with the help of binoculars. The victim of this character's cruelty is also his wife who is a very beautiful woman. Dennis is very notorious for his cruelty, his mansion is built in a wild environment where there are no houses far and wide.

2- The second character of the story is Christina, the wife of this cruel and mad man Dennis, who is as beautiful as a film actress, and a girl much younger in age than Dennis. because of her beauty, Dennis suspects her every move. therefore he keeps his eye on her every time. Dennis also gets angry at every point, abuses her, and sometimes even beets her.
Christina always tells her ordeal to her old friend who was his class met before marriage. and she always thinks in her mind to get out of this hell and requests her old friend to help her.

3- Samuel, the third character of the story, is Christina's old college friend and her well-wisher, as well as he is also the legal advisor of Dennis's business, so his arrival remains in this mansion. Samuel is a famous lawyer in the nearby town who is highly respected in the town. Cristina and Samuel once studied together in college and Samuel are in love with Cristina. Yet Semuel is not married, so Dennis suspects his wife and Samuel of cheating on him behind his eyes.

4- The fourth character of this story is Brandon, a prison inmate whose sister was raped and murdered, for which he holds Dennis responsible, but in the police investigation, Dennis was found not guilty, so Dennis was acquitted in this case.

But one day in a fit of rage, Brendan attacked Dennis, in which one of Dennis's leg had to be amputated near the knee, and he became dependent on a wheelchair. Brendan still holds Dennis guilty of his sister's rape and murder and seeks revenge on him. Now his sentence is about to be completed.

5- The 5th character of the story is Nicholas, a police officer who is considered an expert in the police department to investigate human murders. He is a very clever and sharp-minded police officer, in all the cases he has investigated to date, he has shown the real culprit by holding them. Its role is very important in this story, but its role will start only when I tell you the real story of these characters. And I will tell why the murder was needed in this story, who was killed, who did it, why, was he caught. etc etc.



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9 comments
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Your work is very cool, it makes me curious, I wish you a lot of success in the contest

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Thanks for the review it is very interesting
!1UP

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Nice one! I'm curious how this will all work out. Nice character description.
Thank you.

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@misslasvegas, Right now only the character building was told, the main plot and pace of the story will be described further when said. sorry for the delayed answer.