RE: Delirium Poem

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One edit, you missed an i on "like fire" in the second last stanza, unless I'm realllly dumb and am missing some literary intent here.

I liked the verse about the clockling ticking in reverse. I liked it a lot. Temporality is something I think a lot about in my work.

Very evocative, and full of powerful imagery. Flows well too.

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Thank you.

I once intentionally wrote "mispelt" in a poem. You never know when an error is intentional.

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My error "clockling" in my above comment was not intentional, but I shall let it endure on. A little, cute clock!

Edit, in fact, it wasn't "clockling" it was just clocking.

Time does in fact, clobber us, so I guess it makes sense. :D I changed it to clockling regardless.

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